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matsuaurore ([personal profile] matsuaurore) wrote2014-08-19 11:05 am

Lie to me (7/12)

Title: Lie to me
Author:
[livejournal.com profile] matsuaurore
Pairings: Ohmiya, Junba
Genre: Au, drama, romance, angst, psychology
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Nino is a doctor. His specialty? Finding the lies in the criminal's eyes and their behavior. Nobody can lie to him but one day, Nino discovers that maybe there is one person able to read him as an open book and can beat him on his specialty. Now, the game is starting, who will be the best liar?

cats



Chapter 7:


The next day went well. I resolved all my cases and tortured Ohno a lot for my biggest pleasure. Poor teddy bear, he had to handle a lot with me but he deserved it after what he had done at Top secret. I managed to "forgive" what happened the previous night and thought about other things. I needed sex. I hadn't even fucked since the night I met Ohno, three weeks ago. So, tonight, it would be party sex for me!
I left the institute quickly and prepared myself for my night, my cock squeezing in excitation.

"Don't worry, boy. Tonight, you will fuck an ass or someone will fuck me and make you cum." I said to my cock before realizing it was pretty weird to talk to his penis. "It's the proof I have to fuck!"

I went to Top secret again and ordered a drink before scanning the room. Toma was staring at me with desperate eyes, scolding me for not listening to his advices about my relationship with Ohno.
Mmm, maybe I should wait for someone to come to me. I sat on a seat, crossed my legs and drank. Soon, a pretty man came to me and invited me to dance. My new prey. And he had a good ass. We started to dance, our bodies pressed together before my eyes widened. Here, some meters further was Ohno dancing with a man. What was that?! And he was letting him touch and kiss him! He didn't even allow me to kiss him the first time we met and not even after all this time! Fucking chubby man!

Suddenly, Ohno turned his head toward me and smirked. What was he playing at?! Was he again defying me?! Realizing I was staring at him, Ohno pressed his body against the man and moved his hips sexily, as if they were fucking. I groaned. I wanted to go to him and hit this man but Ohno wasn't my boyfriend, I had no rights to prevent him to dance with someone else. Deciding to take my revenge, I wrapped my arms around the guy I was dancing with and smacked our lips together. You won't win at this game, Ohno Satoshi!
I looked at him and saw he had lost his smile a bit but quickly smirked and kissed the man in front of him. Hey! It was my lips! Nobody could taste it before me! This bitch! I'll kill him and will hit his pretty ass! When I saw Ohno stroking his dick against the man's leg like a dog, I decided to stop it and made my way toward him, bringing a big smile on his lips.

"What are you playing at?! I thought you didn't kiss nor fuck with men?!"

"I still can have a good time with a pretty man. Were you enjoying the view?" Ohno smirked.

"You look like a whore, you disgust me!" I snapped, not liking the pain in his eyes.

"You are the one daring to say that when you sleep with every cock you meet. It's you the whore, not me." Ohno said coldly and left. I stayed still, looking like an idiot. I had hurt him. Baka me!

"Hey, where were you?" The guy I had danced with patted my shoulder.

"Nowhere. Want to fuck me?"

"Why not." The man grinned.

I ended up in his bed and let him fuck me like he wanted but strangely, I didn't feel any pleasure. Why couldn't have a great night now?!

The next day, I went to work in a very very bad mood. I had fucked and hadn't had any orgasm because of this fucking whore!

But when Ohno arrived, he didn't even look at me and for the whole day, kept ignoring me, not even trying to defy me. Where did he think he was?! How did he dare ignoring me?!


"What's wrong with you?" Jun asked.

"Nothing."

"Kazu, you two were becoming friends and today it's as if you didn't exist for each other."

"We had a fight yesterday." I muttered.

"What happened?"

"He was at the Top secret and defied me again."

"Hun?"

"He was kissing a man and stroking his dick against him on purpose, to get me angry."

"And?"

"I insulted him. I said he was a whore." I lowered my eyes, knowing Jun would kill me.

"You what?! Are you serious?!"

"He reacted like that too."

"Of course he has! Who would like to be called a whore?!"

"But he deserved it." I protested.

"Geez, Kazu, are you really a professional of the lie?!"

"Eh?"

"He was trying to make you jealous." Jun sighed.

"Eh? Why?"

"Because he likes you. You're really stupid!"

"What? It's impossible!"

"And why do you think he did that?"

"He told me he didn't date anyone anymore." I protested.

"That's why he did that yesterday. To see your reaction and because he likes you and wants to date you seriously."

"Maybe but I don't like him." I replied, blushing.

"Come on, Kazu, we both know you are trying to fool us. You like him, why is it so hard to recognize it? I'm sure you would make a great couple."

"No way. I date nobody. I just fuck. And he is annoying." I groaned.

"It's you who is annoying with your stubbornness." Jun replied.


I threw him a death glare and left. But maybe he was right after all. And maybe I should apologize. But Ninomiya Kazunari never apologized! Shit, what could I do? Did I have to forget my pride? Grrr, I really hated him! I found Ohno smoking and approached him.


"Hello." I muttered. Ohno looked away, clearly ignoring me. "Okay, I'm sorry. Happy?" I sighed after some seconds.

"You're not." Ohno replied.

"I swear I am. I shouldn't have told you that." I said with sincere eyes.

"It's okay." Ohno finally smiled. "It's not everyday that the almighty Ninomiya Kazunari apologizes. I'm lucky." Ohno chuckled.

"I know I went too far and it wasn't fair as you like me and..."

"Wait wait wait." Ohno cut me off. "I like you?!"

"Yes and I'm sorry I played with your feelings and..."

"Because you really think I like you?!"

"Well, it's obvious."

"You really are pretentious. How would I like a guy who is so arrogant and can't love anyone beside himself?! Don't be so confident, baka!" Ohno snapped and left the roof.

"What?!" I gasped.


Did I hear what I heard?! Did Ohno really talk to me as if I was nothing?! Okay, if he wanted to play this game, we would. But I would never lose against this fucking teddy bear! We will see who will be the best! But shit, I had spoiled everything. We got closer two days ago and now, it was as if we hated each other more than ever.

For two weeks, we kept trying to annoy each other. It was worst than before as we were finding any way to get the other angry. And none of us wanted to give up. I didn't like him. I hated him. Or it was what I was trying to think. Why a man with cute chubby cheeks, beautiful pink pouty lips and a good butt would please me?

But suddenly, Ohno started to change. One day, he didn't come to work without telling me or Jun and came back the next day as if nothing happened but something had changed in his eyes. There were sadness and pain inside his beautiful chocolate eyes. He was usually quiet but this time, it was as if he was mute. And the most weird changement in his behavior was when he didn't even ask to take a case.

"Something happened again between you?" Jun asked as we were joining the hidden room.

"No. I don't understand either his behavior. It's strange."

"Are you sure you haven't told him something?" Jun asked with suspicious eyes.

"Of course I am! Why would it always be me who would put him in this state?!" I snapped, hating the fact that Jun could doubt of me.

"Kazu, you know I love you but we both know how arrogant you can be."

"Thank you." I said sarcastically even if he was right.

"I love you like that because I know it's just a shell but Ohno doesn't know you well and if you told him something..."

"Listen, I didn't tell him anything that could put him in this state."

"Okay." We both turned our heads to see Ohno entering the room and sitting in front of the suspect.


"Shigeaki Rihito. 35 years old, lives in Asakusa." Ohno muttered, reading his file.

"Yes."

"And you are here because you have killed your wife."

"I'm not culprit unless you find proves." Ohno looked at him with surprise. Oh, a suspect who had a good self-confidence.

"Well, it's true but I'll find these proves quickly." Ohno chuckled.

"You have nothing against me." The man smirked.

"We'll see that. So, where were you the 26th at 1 a.m?"

"I was at work as I had to complete a case."

"You're an architect?"

"Yes. And a famous one."

"I didn't know you." Ohno said in a mocking tone.

"Maybe because I'm too expensive. I just work for the richest families." The man chuckled.

"Maybe..." Ohno looked at his file intensively. Why was he hesitating so much? "So, you say you were at work, does someone can prove that?"

"I was alone."

"What a coincidence."

"The security cameras can prove it."

"But you left for fifteen minutes. You could go home, kill your wife and come back to work."

"Impossible. There are 30 minutes between my office and my house."

"I see." Ohno nodded. What was he doing?! This man was lying! "Everything was okay with your wife?" A drop of sweat rolled down the man's temple. He started to get anxious. Good.

"Perfectly well."

Liar!

"Strangely, your coworkers told me you were fighting a lot for two weeks and thought about a divorce."

"It was just little fights, like in all normal couples."

"I see. And does the fact your wife was seeing someone else was the reason of your 'little' fights?"

"I..."

"You knew she was cheating on you. We have pictures from you. This is my theory. You started to have doubts one month ago and decided to follow her. Then..." Ohno put several pictures on the desk. "You caught her in a relationship with this man."

"And then?" The man's leg was moving up and down, the sign he was nervous.

"And then you talked to her. As she didn't deny it and told you she wasn't in love with you anymore, you killed her to take your revenge."

"Why? I would lose everything if I killed her." The man smirked.

"Because sometimes, our reason doesn't let us the choice and we act without thinking. People can do horrible things sometimes. Tomorrow, if a man raped your daughter, wouldn't you like to kill him or at least, rip his balls?" I shivered at the look Ohno threw him. He wasn't acting like usual, his attitude was even more weird.

"I would. Maybe. But the fact is that I haven't killed my wife for something like that."

"So who?"

"I don't know, maybe the man who was fucking her behind my back." The man snapped. I smiled evilly. He was starting to crack. Good job Ohno.

"For someone who doesn't care, you look pretty angry."

"I loved my wife." The man shrugged.

"A good reason for killing her. Maybe you didn't bear seeing her with someone else. Maybe this man was giving most to her. Maybe he was better or was good in bed."

"Stop..." The man growled.

"It's hard, ne? Not knowing why she was cheating on you. Not having the answers of all your questions. Maybe she was happier with him and loved him."

"I said STOP!" Shigeaki yelled, hitting the desk with his fist.

"Truth hurts, ne." Ohno smiled. "It's funny because we are all the same. We want answers, we want to put a word on all our pains and questions but when we finally do, we aren't satisfied because we suffer even more. But at least, we have the answers, we don't live with all these 'why' in our head. Truth is the best even if it also hurts sometimes and it's our worst enemy." What was he playing at?! Was it a game for him?!

"I agree but I haven't killed her."

"I think we need something to make you confess." Ohno smiled and spread pictures on the table. My eyes widened in shocked. What was he doing?! Idiot!!

"What..."

"It's the pictures of the murder." Ohno said softly.

"Take them back!"

"Why? It shouldn't be a problem for you to see that. After all, it's your crime." Ohno said coldly.

"No..."

"I wonder something..." Ohno put his chin on his hands, looking intensively at the man. "How does it feel?"

"Eh?"

"How is it? To kill a human. To cut someone's throat. You tied her up and tortured her, cutting her skin and her face. You wanted to make her ugly not to let anyone desire her ever again."

"I didn't!"

"Oh, really? Then, what did you start with? You raped her first and then cut her skin before ending with her throat? Did she beg? Did she implore you not to kill her?" Ohno smirked. I had never seen this look in his eyes, it was scaring, as if he was the devil himself. He was someone else, as if he was taking a revenge. Maybe he was too much in this role.

"I was at work!!!"

"Then, how do you explain the cameras didn't record 15 minutes of the night? It's as if someone had cut it." The man paled at Ohno's words.

"I... I don't know. Technology makes caprices sometimes."

"Or maybe you cut it to have enough time to go to your house, kill your wife and come back, pretending you were in a konbini for 15 minutes. And it's funny because the konbini you told us you went didn't register you." Ohno smiled.

"She told me that she had always used me." The man whispered, lowering his head. "She never loved me and wanted to steal my money to leave with this bastard!!!! I loved her! For ten years I did everything for her. I worked hard and gave her an expensive house and clothes! She deserved to die!!"

"You know..." Ohno stood up and looked at the man with a sad smile. "Maybe she didn't want an expensive house. Maybe she just wanted her husband at home the night to eat with her, talk and sleep. Maybe she just wanted not to be alone." Ohno whispered before leaving the room.

I opened the door roughly but didn't see Ohno anymore. Where was he?! I ran toward the entry of the institute and saw him disappearing in the mass of people who were crossing the road.

"Ohno!!!" I screamed. Ohno turned his head toward me and made me freeze. He was crying. Tears were rolling down his cheeks like a waterfall. Ohno forced a smile and ran away. Where was he going in this state?! I had to find him!! I tried to follow him but Shibuya was full of people at this hour and finding someone was like looking for a mermaid in the sea. Though, I didn't give up and kept running, calling his name with despair and getting weird looks from the persons around me.

Suddenly, I saw him. I recognized his slightly long black hair and his wet chubby cheeks. He was about to cross the road but hadn't seen the red fire.

"Satoshi!!!!" I yelled and caught him from behind before he could make a step, preventing him to end under the car that was passing quickly. I was out of breath and held him tight, my face against his neck.

"Nino?" Ohno whispered in shocked, just realizing he had almost ended under this car.

"Can't you look properly before crossing the road!!! This car almost crushed into you, idiot!!!" I yelled at him.

"Nino..."

"You've scared me!!! I thought I was going to have a heart attack!!! What were you thinking about?!!!!" I kept shouting, ignoring his tentative to talk.

"Nino!"

"What?!" I groaned.

"Why are you crying?" Ohno asked softly.

"What?! I'm not cr..." I froze when Ohno touched my cheek, making me realize that he was right. I was crying. Lots of tears were rolling down my cheeks.

"Why are you crying?" Ohno asked again, his hand cupping my cheek.

I closed my eyes, trying to calm down and without thinking, I wrapped him tightly in my arms and buried my face in his neck, letting my tears fall even more.

"Don't ever do that again." I whispered. I ignored the weird looks that people were throwing us. I didn't care anymore. It felt so natural to hug Satoshi like that.

I felt as if I was at home.


To be continued...


A/N: Finally!!!! It was time for them to get closer, Nino almost spoiled everything at the beginning but he managed to fix his mistake xD I like this chapter a lot because we can see Ohchan's true nature and having him so fragile is great after all his teases xD and having Nino letting his pride go is also enjoyable, don't you think? XD
NC-17 will maybe be in the next chapter, who knows? ;) It would be good to have Nino and Ohchan admitting their feelings or at least, attraction for each other xD

[identity profile] atenea005.livejournal.com 2014-08-19 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
wow I the first fto comment!!yes!!!i LIKE TOO!!! AHHH POOR NIN!!I'm happy he could stop Ohno If not who knows what would have happened? but I really like I hope they can make other step more close 'course!!XD

ps.: hope you're enjoying your trip and have fun XD

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-19 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :) hawaii is great and very beautiful, you can't think about Arashi when you have so beautiful landscapes and places to visit :) I'm going to see the place where they filmed Jurassic park, such wonderful view to see xD

Yes, they are getting closer, it was about time xD they are both fragiles behind their strong attitudes and will need each other a lot :) thank you for reading and commenting dear, I'm happy you liked it :)

[identity profile] atenea005.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 02:03 pm (UTC)(link)
wow It's great!! enjoy!!:D

sure I like it!! I'll wait for next!!:D

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 08:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you dear :)
The view was wonderful :)

[identity profile] littlebadlei.livejournal.com 2014-08-19 10:44 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG
OH-CHAN
WHY ARE YOU CRYING
DON'T CRY
NO
T^T
and nino..... you too don't crryyyyyyy
i'm gonna cryyyyy T^T

but i need to say that this chapter was quite interesting!! cause wow....i couldn't stop! iin the middle i was so angry for both of them like fuck you guys just do something and then oh-chan just..... no
T^T
Edited 2014-08-19 22:45 (UTC)

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-19 11:16 pm (UTC)(link)
It's frustrating, ne? XD it broke my heart to make them cry but it was necessary for the story xD don't worry, these two baka will do something after that xD thank you for reading and commenting dear :)

[identity profile] littlebadlei.livejournal.com 2014-08-20 08:34 am (UTC)(link)
oh oh... did you go/ are you still in hawaii? o.o

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
I'm still in hawaii :) it's so damn beautiful and I have seen the place were they filmed Jurassik park and king kong, it's a great memory :)

[identity profile] littlebadlei.livejournal.com 2014-08-23 12:00 pm (UTC)(link)
oooh, how long are you going to be there? :3
cooool!!! x3x

[identity profile] gambitsfox.livejournal.com 2014-08-20 01:08 am (UTC)(link)
I was so happy to see this chapter up. I really enjoyed the up and down relationship between the two. Such a powerful ending to this chapter. Looking forward to the next.....hot one. ; )

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-20 05:28 am (UTC)(link)
I'm happy you liked it :) they were cute together at the end and won't stop in the next chapter and will be hot of course ;) thank you for reading and commenting :)

[identity profile] lilisan31.livejournal.com 2014-08-20 04:59 am (UTC)(link)
Boooouuuh... Je n'ai pas été la 1ère.. À cause du travail je me couche à 22h30 ;__;
Bref !
Ce chapitre est vraiment mignon ~
On passe de l'infâme taquinerie mal comprise à la pureté d'un sentiment brut <3
Je me demande néanmoins si Oh-chan acceptera de son côté les sentiments qu'il peut avoir pour Nino.. Il a l'air d'être celui qui aura le plus de mal à l'accepter malgré qu'il parrait être celui qui les a compris le plus vite.
J'avoue que Jun m'agace un peu à lui répéter qu'il aime Ohno.. Qu'il le laisse s'en rendre compte tout seul, en lui disant seulement de ne pas le blesser et le prévenir quand il a tord TT
Par contre je doute que dans le prochain chapitre il y ai du NC.. À moins que tu avances rapidement avec une action so cute ~ toi la sorcière !!
Vivement la suite !! Merci pour le partage ~

Ps : tu ne postes pas de photos ? ^^
Xoxo

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-20 05:32 am (UTC)(link)
tu seras 1ere la prochaine fois ;)
au contraire, ohchan a compris ses sentiments et ne demande qu'à pouvoir les donner, mais il doute de ceux de nino qui fait encore sa tête de mule xD jun en a juste marre que nino s'auto détruise depuis des années et le fait chier avec ça pour lui faire prendre conscience de ses sentiments et de ce qu'il va manquer si il continue xD
eh eh, tu verras ;)
j'ai zappé donc la prochaine fois pour les photos xD merci pour le com :)

[identity profile] lilisan31.livejournal.com 2014-08-20 10:27 am (UTC)(link)
Réserve le moi la prochaine fois ~ ;)
J'avais plus la sensation qu'il prendrait plus de temps par rapport à son passé compliqué à gérer..
Pas de soucis j'attendrai la prochaine fois
Xoxo

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:08 am (UTC)(link)
Ah bah tu verras xD en même temps on sait pas ce qui s'est passé dans son passé xD
Ouais j'essaierai de pas oublié pour le prochain :)

[identity profile] lilisan31.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:21 am (UTC)(link)
Pour Oh'chan ce n'est pas l'histoire avec son professeur à ses 18ans ? Tu me mets le doute :0
En tout cas yep ! On verra ça dans le prochain chap ~

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:24 am (UTC)(link)
T'es déjà debout Oo xD eh eh justement je dis rien, tu verras xD

[identity profile] lilisan31.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:27 am (UTC)(link)
Yep depuis 5h45 ><
Je pars de chez moi à 7h pour prendre les transports en communs et aller travailler - -'
Arg !! C'est vicieux ça !!! Du coup il lui est arrivé autre chose !? Oh'chan.. Babe.. Ne reste pas avec la sorcière !! Enfuis toi dans une autre fic ><

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:28 am (UTC)(link)
Tu bosses dans quoi?
Eh eh, j'aime semer le doute xD oi je suis pas une sorcière >

[identity profile] lilisan31.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:30 am (UTC)(link)
Secrétaire médicale
Hahahaha je n'ai pas peur de ta magie d’illusion ~

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:41 am (UTC)(link)
C'est un job pour l'été ou tu changes de voie?
>< pour la peine je garde l'ohmiya pour moi xD

[identity profile] lilisan31.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:47 am (UTC)(link)
J'y travail depuis 2ans pendant mes vacances scolaires ^^, c'est mieux payé que de l'animation en centre. Mais, c'est beaucoup plus blasant moralement..
NAAAAAHHH Partage !! D'ailleurs tu n'as pas quelque chose qui traîne pour me remonter le morale ? xD

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 05:02 am (UTC)(link)
Oh c'est cool comme job d'été :)
Mmmm Nan xD je suis une sorcière après tout xDDDD

[identity profile] lilisan31.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
Humm c'est une bonne expérience mais travailler pour 4 médecins avec différentes règles et demandes c'est épuisant à la longue.. Sans compter les patients ><
Mais !! C'est bien payé !!!! Fuck ! Être cupide me fait tenir.
Aaaaahhh je te déteste !! Tu es une horrible sorcière.. Mais si comme dans Kirikou on t'enlève une épine tu deviens gentil ?

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 05:16 am (UTC)(link)
XD l'argent c'est ce qui faut tenir quand le boulot est dur xD
Apporte moi l'ohmiya et je deviendrai gentille :P

[identity profile] lilisan31.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
Yup c'est vrai !
Mais là 3 semaines.. Je sature un peu beaucoup.
Hahaha crois moi si je les avais sous la main.. Je ne partagerai pas !! Je partage pratiquement tout mais ça.. Arg ce serai inhumain (déjà qu'ils seront à ma merci.. Ahaha)

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 05:23 am (UTC)(link)
Moi non plus je partagerais pas xD juste les vidéos de leurs ébats avec des personnes préalablement sélectionnées xD

[identity profile] lilisan31.livejournal.com 2014-08-22 04:29 am (UTC)(link)
Hahaha tu mises plus sur l'aspect monétaire $+$
Mais c'est vrai que je serai prête à me ruiner (plus qu'aujourd'hui haha) pour avoir une vidéo.. Omg c'est vraiment.. De la perversité malsaine !

Ps : désolé j'ai complètement oublié de t'envoyer PDG.. Hier j'ai fait un achat de Doujinshi et j'ai vaguement oublié le reste (assomé par la somme)

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-22 06:36 am (UTC)(link)
Je paierais cher aussi xD
Pas de soucis, mais je prends l'avion demain donc si tu me l'envois pas avant 10h du matin, je pourrai le traduire que dimanche quand j'arriverai à Paris ^^

[identity profile] lilisan31.livejournal.com 2014-08-22 07:34 am (UTC)(link)
On est vraiment dérangé mentalement hahaha !
Oh Welcome back ~
Ne t'inquiète pas j'ai jusqu'au 29 ^^ tu pourras prendre ton temps :)
Je t'envois ça ce weekend.
Bon retour, Take care of you
Xoxo

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-22 07:46 am (UTC)(link)
TROP XD

pas de soucis, merci :)

ps/ je vais poster la suite de lie to me,cadeau xD
leiva21: (wwgakushou)

[personal profile] leiva21 2014-08-20 11:32 am (UTC)(link)
The ending of the chapter looks promising for Ohmiya^^
they should talk properly at least after this and not being carried away by their stubbornness

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:10 am (UTC)(link)
They are both so stubborn xD we have to pray for them to be less stubborn xD thank you for reading and commenting dear :)

[identity profile] wjktl.livejournal.com 2014-08-20 06:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!! i really love it for many reasons....ohno's sudden devil scary face & actions....his tears after the case...and nino's tears without he realize it!!!!and the hug! ouh~~~this is just so beautiful!!! thanks so much
Edited 2014-08-20 18:37 (UTC)

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:11 am (UTC)(link)
XD I'm happy you liked it :) they are both cute together in this chapter :) and it's not the end ;) thank you for reading and commenting dear :)

[identity profile] ryusa.livejournal.com 2014-08-20 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
I really love this ending of this chapter..
ohmiya, pls be gentle for each other... >___

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:12 am (UTC)(link)
I'm happy you like this end :) you'll be happy with the next one then :) thank you for reading and commenting dear :)
akhikaru: (sakurai-san)

[personal profile] akhikaru 2014-08-20 10:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Stubborn Nino... *shakes head*
Awwww, don't cry Oh-chan!! :(
Well, at least Nino went after him *sigh* He really has to admit his feelings soon... it's getting too obvious he can't hide it hahahaha!!!
I'm looking forward to the development of this ^^
Thanks for the update!!! :D

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
Eh eh, Nino is very stubborn ne? XD we have to hope he will realize his feelings :) thank you for reading and commenting dear :)

[identity profile] br-arashi.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:19 am (UTC)(link)
Beautiful ending!
Can't wait to see how they will behave after such a beautiful truthful moment...

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 04:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you :) we'll see how it turns xD thank you for reading and commenting dear :)

[identity profile] dani-mathoz.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 12:42 pm (UTC)(link)
SOOOOORRY

I'm follow this fic but no time to leave a comment SORRY!

But you know but I wait for whole week to read this is my oasis ♥

And this chapter was amazing and made my heart beat faster... THIS END OMG you're so awesome and I'm waiting for the next ♥

I love this Ohno you know ♥

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Don't worry it's okay, we are all busy ^^ I'm happy you like this fic :) ohmiya is getting close now :) thank you for reading and commenting dear :)

[identity profile] zhanisa.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
yeay,thank you for the new update \(^O^)/
it's more complicated ne!
there are many secrets that need to be revealed >.<
and it's a bit surprised me about ohchan's scary face and action
it's a bit scary but i can feel the pain too *pats ohchan

and i can't wait for the continuation XD

thank you ^^

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-21 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Ohchan has lots of scars in his life, maybe Nino will heal his heart :) thank you for reading and commenting dear :)

arigato!!

[identity profile] hatori-sachiyo.livejournal.com 2014-08-22 01:03 am (UTC)(link)
I bet something happened to satoshi. but I'm glad nino decided to search for him and save him. I hope they will confess to each other and admit their true feelings. :D

Re: arigato!!

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-08-22 06:38 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, Ohchan has many scars in his life, we have to hope Nino will heal his heart :) thank you for reading and commenting dear :)
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[personal profile] coolohoh 2014-09-05 02:45 am (UTC)(link)
they finally hugged!

[identity profile] matsuaurore.livejournal.com 2014-09-05 08:42 pm (UTC)(link)
yes, finally xD it was about time xD thank you for reading and commenting :)