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Lie to me (5/?)
Title: Lie to me
Author:
matsuaurore
Pairings: Ohmiya, Junba
Genre: Au, drama, romance, angst, psychology
Summary: Nino is a doctor. His specialty? Finding the lies in the criminal's eyes and their behavior. Nobody can lie to him but one day, Nino discovers that maybe there is one person able to read him as an open book and can beat him on his specialty. Now, the game is starting, who will be the best liar?
Chapter 5:
"Should we start?" Ohno smiled. I licked my lips hungrily, ready to spend an amazing night.
I walked toward him, lust shining in my eyes. I touched his naked shoulder with the tip of my fingers, making him shiver. My hand traveled toward his nipples and his chest, enjoying the feeling of his thin but sculpt chest. I bit my lip, excitation wining me even more. I approached my face, ready to kiss him and Ohno closed his eyes.
I pulled away.
"Take your clothes back." I stated.
"Eh?" Ohno's eyes widened in shock.
"I won't fuck you. Not tonight, not like that."
"Why?"
"Because you don't really want it." I explained.
"I do!"
"Ohno, don't try to fool me, you know who I am." I chuckled.
"But..."
"I've seen the disgust in your eyes. It would be a rape if I fucked
you."
"Rape is when you force someone."
"And you don't want it. Even if you don't push me away, you don't want it and maybe I am the biggest asshole of Japan but I'm not a rapist." I smiled.
"I know."
"Don't worry, I'll keep my promise, you'll work with us, your talent is too big to be wasted."
"Thank you."
"Don't thank me now because not fucking you doesn't mean I'll be kinder. I'll make your life a hell and we'll see if you can handle it." I smirked.
"We could at least watch a movie to end the night." Ohno chuckled.
"Why not? A movie and some beers." I exclaimed.
"Perfect!" Ohno grinned and sat on my sofa.
"What do you want to watch?"
"A comedy. I want to laugh."
"Okay... Mmm... A movie or a drama?"
"Do you have Nodame Cantabile?"
"Of course, this drama is so great!" I exclaimed. "And Tamaki Hiroshi is pretty hot." I smirked.
"Yes! And I really like Ueno Juri, she is a good actress and pretty cute."
"Yosh, then, it will be Nodame!" I put the DVD and sat next to Ohno.
During the first episode, I kept throwing him looks, loving the way he was laughing, his face shining in happiness and well, for once in my life, I could say I had seen Ohno Satoshi awake.
We spent a great moment, watching the drama and drinking beers while commenting the episode and fighting about who was hot and who was crazy.
"How can you say he wasn't sexy?!" Ohno exclaimed about one of the characters.
"Listen, chubby man!" I raised my hand, half drunk and trying to form a correct sentence. "A man who stalks another man isn't sexy. And mostly if he has a moustache and afro hair. How can you find him sexy? He is ugly and clumsy!"
"Nino, you're drunk!" Ohno giggled, looking as drunk as I was.
"I am not! Look!" I stood up to walk but fell on his lap.
"You're drunk." Ohno laughed and pushed me, making me fall on the ground.
"Oi! Is it a way to treat your boss?!" I protested.
"Will you punish me?" Ohno smirked.
"Be careful, Satopi or I'll be nasty!" I giggled.
"Satopi? What is it? It's weird!" Ohno chuckled.
"It's as weird as you!" I said in a mocking tone.
"Hey!"
"I want to sleep!" I whined, trying to stand up.
"And me?"
"Well, as you looked so pitiful and I didn't get my orgasm, you'll sleep on the carpet!"
"Eh?! No way!" Ohno protested.
"If you pay me, you can take the sofa." I smirked.
"Do you really think I'm a whore?"
"You could. You're enough cute for that."
"I prefer to ignore this rotten comment or I'll have to kick your ass." Ohno laughed.
"I'm scared!" I smiled evilly.
"Where are your restrooms?"
"In the corridor!" I pointed it.
"Thanks." Ohno left and it took all my strength to clean the mess we had made before sitting on the sofa.
"Ohno? Are you alive or did the toilets swallow you?" I giggled. But no answer. "Sa~to~pi?" I chuckled, standing up but the restrooms were empty. "Where is he?" I mumbled and gasped when I saw two feet standing in the air. I opened my bedroom completely and whined, seeing Ohno in the middle of my bed, sleeping (and snoring) deeply. "Fucking chubby man, you'll be the death of me." I groaned and too tired to push him out of my bed, made him roll on the left side and laid next to him.
"Mmm..." Ohno smiled in his sleep and threw his arm around my waist.
"Stupid old man, you'll pay for that." I muttered but smiled tenderly in front of his cute sleeping face. He looked like a baby with his hair falling a bit on his cheeks and eyes, his mouth forming a cute pout. I tried to push him away but this time, Ohno climbed on me, his leg coming above me and his face nuzzling in my neck. Sighing, I wrapped my arm around his waist and closed my eyes, swearing to myself that he would pay for that.
When I opened my eyes the next morning, Ohno was still half on me, snoring against my neck.
"So romantic." I rolled my eyes and shook him but Ohno only tightened his grip around me like an octopus."How can he do to sleep so deeply?" I muttered.
An evil smile spread my lips and with all my strength, I pushed him roughly, making him fall on the ground.
"Eh?! Are you serious?!" I gasped when Ohno only groaned and kept sleeping.
This man was just too weird. If he didn't exist, we would have to create him. Deciding to let this baka sleep on the ground, I left my bedroom to take a shower before preparing my breakfast and a dark coffee. I drank while examining my new cases of the day, shivering in front of the madness of the murder.
"Why was I on the ground?" A sleepy voice made me jump and I almost melted when I saw Ohno entering the kitchen with a sleepy face and messed-up hair. He looked so cute!
"Because you slept on me the whole night and as you didn't want to wake up, I had to push you roughly and you fell on the ground and didn't even wake up."
"I have a heavy sleep." Ohno mumbled, collapsing on the chair next to me.
"No? Really?!" I asked sarcastically.
"Stop making fun of me and feed me."
"In your dreams, Satopi! If you want, I have still some cat's food." I smirked. Ohno raised an eyebrow, looking at me with the look -Do you really think I'm an idiot?- "There are some rice and miso soup. And coffee if you want to wake up one day."
"Thanks."
"And you can take a shower after, you stink." I said in a mocking tone.
"Always gentleman." Ohno muttered.
"Only with the ones I fuck." I smirked. Ohno threw me a death glare but ate anyway before joining my bathroom. If I could, I would have joined him to fuck his pretty ass.
I sat on my sofa and spread the papers on the table in front of me to look with attention at the details.
"What are you doing?" I felt a weight on me and saw Ohno looking at the papers above my shoulder, his fresh scent invading my nose. He smelt so good!
"I'm working on the new cases."
"This one is culprit." Ohno showed me the picture of one of the men.
"How do you know, you haven't even met him." I chuckled.
"His eyes." Ohno shrugged. Ok, I knew he was good but it was only a picture, he couldn't know if the man was lying.
"If you say so." I muttered.
"We could work on this case together." Ohno proposed.
"Why not?" I smiled slightly.
We worked the whole morning on the cases and I had to admit Ohno was good. His ideas were great and he found details that I had missed certainly because I was too focused on his beautiful fingers. He really had artist's fingers, longs, thins and with visible veins on his hands, my fantasy. How would it feel to have it around my cock? Just thinking about it turned me on.
****
When we entered the institute, Jun stared at us with wide eyes. Well, he we were meant to hate each other and were now, going to work together while talking.
"You have finally admitted that you like him?" Jun smirked.
"No. We spent the night together, that's all." I shrugged.
"You fucked?"
"No. I decided I didn't want, finally. We just watched the TV and drank beers." Jun looked at me with wide eyes. "What?"
"Nothing. It's just... You've never spent the night at watching the TV and talking with a man."
"It was just once. I won't do it again." I shrugged. "Come on, we have work to do. Ohno, get your ass here!" I called Ohno who was looking at some papers with a concentrate face.
"Hai!"
"So, you wanted to work with me, so, look and learn." I smirked.
"Still so arrogant." Ohno replied.
"And you still defying me. Listen, we have spent a good moment yesterday but I'm still the boss here, so, shut your mouth or I'll shove my dick inside." I replied before entering the room.
"It's his way of saying that he recognizes your talent." Jun chuckled.
"Very subtle." Ohno laughed.
"So, Shibata Hiroshi, 18 years old... You are here because you've killed one of your classmates." I said, not even looking at the boy in front of me.
"No."
"Hun?" I raised my eyes with a boring look. We hadn't lots of proves unfortunately.
"I haven't killed him."
"You haven't?" I put my chin on my hands, staring at him intensively.
"I... No." A drop of sweat rolled down his temple.
"And where were you when the crime happened?"
"I..." The boy bit his lip.
"Listen, I'm tired because a fucking chubby man has found funny to sleep on me..." I threw a glance toward the tanned glass, knowing Ohno was behind. "And I have other cases after yours, so, be a good boy and tell me the truth."
"I... He was bullying me for seven years!!!" The boy screamed angrily. "Do you think he deserved to live?! He was beating me everyday with a bat, I ended with broken bones, he was stealing my money, my school's work and lessons. I hated him with all my soul." The boy said coldly.
His look made me shiver, it was as if he was crazy, as if his eyes were dark. "He treated me like a shit so, I gave him the same treatment. He deserved to die like a pig. It was so funny to see him dying in his blood, trying to call for help." The boy laughed crazily. What was that? This boy was totally insane.
"And why have you also killed Takeru?"
"Because he had seen me cutting this pig's throat. I had to shut his mouth." The boy smirked.
I paled at his words and left the room quickly. Tears were rolling down my cheeks and I was shaking.
"Kazu!" I raised my face to see Jun running toward me.
"I'm okay, J..." I smiled weakly but Jun pulled me in his arms where I burst into tears. "Jun..."
"I know." Jun whispered, tightening his grip around me.
"He is... I could see Mamoru in his eyes..." I sobbed violently.
"I know. But it's not the same. This story is over, Kazu. It was a long time ago and you have to forget it." Jun said while stroking my hair.
"But..."
"No, Kazu." Jun cupped my crying face. "It wasn't the same. This story is behind us and we have to forget it, okay?"
"Okay." I nodded weakly.
"I'll take the next case, calm down and come back when you'll feel better." Jun kissed my forehead before leaving.
"Thank you, J." Jun smiled slightly.
I decided to climb on the roof and lightened a cigarette, sighing happily when I started to feel better. My hand was still shaking a bit but I tried to erase the painful memories in my mind.
"Are you okay?" I jumped and turned my head to see Ohno looking at me with worried eyes.
"Yes." I shrugged, taking a puff of my cigarette.
"What happened in the room?"
"Nothing, I was tired and overreacted."
"Liar." Of course he knew I was lying but I would never tell him the truth.
"This boy was scaring."
"I bet you've already seen worst, it's not this boy who put you in this state. It's something else." Ohno stared at me intensively. Shit, he was reading me too well.
"He reminded me an old case that I was trying to forget." I muttered.
"What..."
"Listen, it's not something I want to talk about." I said coldly.
"Okay. But if you need to talk, I'm here."
"Thank you." I smirked and blew my smoke right in his face, making him cough.
"Still an asshole." Ohno mumbled.
"Still annoying." I kissed his cheek and left.
"Ninomiya-san!" I turned my head and before I could react, a pair of lips was pressed against mine.
"It's a 'thank you' for letting me stay in your bed the last night." Ohno grinned in front of my shocked face and left, giggling.
I put my fingers on my lips, paralyzed. Ohno just kissed me some seconds ago? What was that?! What was he playing at?! I had to do something before I could lose the control of this situation.
Next defy: To punish him for defying me again. Ohno Satoshi, you're going to regret your self-confidence!
To be continued...
A/N: Sorry, the sex wasn’t for now xD you have to wait a little bit longer to have our hot Ohmiya fucking xD I like when they provoke each other so, they will fight more before going to bed xD But at least, they got a little bit closer and it’s a good point J Next chapter will be probably posted from Hawaï, I’m so impatient to go there and with all the Arashi blast and concert, it will be fun xD
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Pairings: Ohmiya, Junba
Genre: Au, drama, romance, angst, psychology
Summary: Nino is a doctor. His specialty? Finding the lies in the criminal's eyes and their behavior. Nobody can lie to him but one day, Nino discovers that maybe there is one person able to read him as an open book and can beat him on his specialty. Now, the game is starting, who will be the best liar?

Chapter 5:
"Should we start?" Ohno smiled. I licked my lips hungrily, ready to spend an amazing night.
I walked toward him, lust shining in my eyes. I touched his naked shoulder with the tip of my fingers, making him shiver. My hand traveled toward his nipples and his chest, enjoying the feeling of his thin but sculpt chest. I bit my lip, excitation wining me even more. I approached my face, ready to kiss him and Ohno closed his eyes.
I pulled away.
"Take your clothes back." I stated.
"Eh?" Ohno's eyes widened in shock.
"I won't fuck you. Not tonight, not like that."
"Why?"
"Because you don't really want it." I explained.
"I do!"
"Ohno, don't try to fool me, you know who I am." I chuckled.
"But..."
"I've seen the disgust in your eyes. It would be a rape if I fucked
you."
"Rape is when you force someone."
"And you don't want it. Even if you don't push me away, you don't want it and maybe I am the biggest asshole of Japan but I'm not a rapist." I smiled.
"I know."
"Don't worry, I'll keep my promise, you'll work with us, your talent is too big to be wasted."
"Thank you."
"Don't thank me now because not fucking you doesn't mean I'll be kinder. I'll make your life a hell and we'll see if you can handle it." I smirked.
"We could at least watch a movie to end the night." Ohno chuckled.
"Why not? A movie and some beers." I exclaimed.
"Perfect!" Ohno grinned and sat on my sofa.
"What do you want to watch?"
"A comedy. I want to laugh."
"Okay... Mmm... A movie or a drama?"
"Do you have Nodame Cantabile?"
"Of course, this drama is so great!" I exclaimed. "And Tamaki Hiroshi is pretty hot." I smirked.
"Yes! And I really like Ueno Juri, she is a good actress and pretty cute."
"Yosh, then, it will be Nodame!" I put the DVD and sat next to Ohno.
During the first episode, I kept throwing him looks, loving the way he was laughing, his face shining in happiness and well, for once in my life, I could say I had seen Ohno Satoshi awake.
We spent a great moment, watching the drama and drinking beers while commenting the episode and fighting about who was hot and who was crazy.
"How can you say he wasn't sexy?!" Ohno exclaimed about one of the characters.
"Listen, chubby man!" I raised my hand, half drunk and trying to form a correct sentence. "A man who stalks another man isn't sexy. And mostly if he has a moustache and afro hair. How can you find him sexy? He is ugly and clumsy!"
"Nino, you're drunk!" Ohno giggled, looking as drunk as I was.
"I am not! Look!" I stood up to walk but fell on his lap.
"You're drunk." Ohno laughed and pushed me, making me fall on the ground.
"Oi! Is it a way to treat your boss?!" I protested.
"Will you punish me?" Ohno smirked.
"Be careful, Satopi or I'll be nasty!" I giggled.
"Satopi? What is it? It's weird!" Ohno chuckled.
"It's as weird as you!" I said in a mocking tone.
"Hey!"
"I want to sleep!" I whined, trying to stand up.
"And me?"
"Well, as you looked so pitiful and I didn't get my orgasm, you'll sleep on the carpet!"
"Eh?! No way!" Ohno protested.
"If you pay me, you can take the sofa." I smirked.
"Do you really think I'm a whore?"
"You could. You're enough cute for that."
"I prefer to ignore this rotten comment or I'll have to kick your ass." Ohno laughed.
"I'm scared!" I smiled evilly.
"Where are your restrooms?"
"In the corridor!" I pointed it.
"Thanks." Ohno left and it took all my strength to clean the mess we had made before sitting on the sofa.
"Ohno? Are you alive or did the toilets swallow you?" I giggled. But no answer. "Sa~to~pi?" I chuckled, standing up but the restrooms were empty. "Where is he?" I mumbled and gasped when I saw two feet standing in the air. I opened my bedroom completely and whined, seeing Ohno in the middle of my bed, sleeping (and snoring) deeply. "Fucking chubby man, you'll be the death of me." I groaned and too tired to push him out of my bed, made him roll on the left side and laid next to him.
"Mmm..." Ohno smiled in his sleep and threw his arm around my waist.
"Stupid old man, you'll pay for that." I muttered but smiled tenderly in front of his cute sleeping face. He looked like a baby with his hair falling a bit on his cheeks and eyes, his mouth forming a cute pout. I tried to push him away but this time, Ohno climbed on me, his leg coming above me and his face nuzzling in my neck. Sighing, I wrapped my arm around his waist and closed my eyes, swearing to myself that he would pay for that.
When I opened my eyes the next morning, Ohno was still half on me, snoring against my neck.
"So romantic." I rolled my eyes and shook him but Ohno only tightened his grip around me like an octopus."How can he do to sleep so deeply?" I muttered.
An evil smile spread my lips and with all my strength, I pushed him roughly, making him fall on the ground.
"Eh?! Are you serious?!" I gasped when Ohno only groaned and kept sleeping.
This man was just too weird. If he didn't exist, we would have to create him. Deciding to let this baka sleep on the ground, I left my bedroom to take a shower before preparing my breakfast and a dark coffee. I drank while examining my new cases of the day, shivering in front of the madness of the murder.
"Why was I on the ground?" A sleepy voice made me jump and I almost melted when I saw Ohno entering the kitchen with a sleepy face and messed-up hair. He looked so cute!
"Because you slept on me the whole night and as you didn't want to wake up, I had to push you roughly and you fell on the ground and didn't even wake up."
"I have a heavy sleep." Ohno mumbled, collapsing on the chair next to me.
"No? Really?!" I asked sarcastically.
"Stop making fun of me and feed me."
"In your dreams, Satopi! If you want, I have still some cat's food." I smirked. Ohno raised an eyebrow, looking at me with the look -Do you really think I'm an idiot?- "There are some rice and miso soup. And coffee if you want to wake up one day."
"Thanks."
"And you can take a shower after, you stink." I said in a mocking tone.
"Always gentleman." Ohno muttered.
"Only with the ones I fuck." I smirked. Ohno threw me a death glare but ate anyway before joining my bathroom. If I could, I would have joined him to fuck his pretty ass.
I sat on my sofa and spread the papers on the table in front of me to look with attention at the details.
"What are you doing?" I felt a weight on me and saw Ohno looking at the papers above my shoulder, his fresh scent invading my nose. He smelt so good!
"I'm working on the new cases."
"This one is culprit." Ohno showed me the picture of one of the men.
"How do you know, you haven't even met him." I chuckled.
"His eyes." Ohno shrugged. Ok, I knew he was good but it was only a picture, he couldn't know if the man was lying.
"If you say so." I muttered.
"We could work on this case together." Ohno proposed.
"Why not?" I smiled slightly.
We worked the whole morning on the cases and I had to admit Ohno was good. His ideas were great and he found details that I had missed certainly because I was too focused on his beautiful fingers. He really had artist's fingers, longs, thins and with visible veins on his hands, my fantasy. How would it feel to have it around my cock? Just thinking about it turned me on.
****
When we entered the institute, Jun stared at us with wide eyes. Well, he we were meant to hate each other and were now, going to work together while talking.
"You have finally admitted that you like him?" Jun smirked.
"No. We spent the night together, that's all." I shrugged.
"You fucked?"
"No. I decided I didn't want, finally. We just watched the TV and drank beers." Jun looked at me with wide eyes. "What?"
"Nothing. It's just... You've never spent the night at watching the TV and talking with a man."
"It was just once. I won't do it again." I shrugged. "Come on, we have work to do. Ohno, get your ass here!" I called Ohno who was looking at some papers with a concentrate face.
"Hai!"
"So, you wanted to work with me, so, look and learn." I smirked.
"Still so arrogant." Ohno replied.
"And you still defying me. Listen, we have spent a good moment yesterday but I'm still the boss here, so, shut your mouth or I'll shove my dick inside." I replied before entering the room.
"It's his way of saying that he recognizes your talent." Jun chuckled.
"Very subtle." Ohno laughed.
"So, Shibata Hiroshi, 18 years old... You are here because you've killed one of your classmates." I said, not even looking at the boy in front of me.
"No."
"Hun?" I raised my eyes with a boring look. We hadn't lots of proves unfortunately.
"I haven't killed him."
"You haven't?" I put my chin on my hands, staring at him intensively.
"I... No." A drop of sweat rolled down his temple.
"And where were you when the crime happened?"
"I..." The boy bit his lip.
"Listen, I'm tired because a fucking chubby man has found funny to sleep on me..." I threw a glance toward the tanned glass, knowing Ohno was behind. "And I have other cases after yours, so, be a good boy and tell me the truth."
"I... He was bullying me for seven years!!!" The boy screamed angrily. "Do you think he deserved to live?! He was beating me everyday with a bat, I ended with broken bones, he was stealing my money, my school's work and lessons. I hated him with all my soul." The boy said coldly.
His look made me shiver, it was as if he was crazy, as if his eyes were dark. "He treated me like a shit so, I gave him the same treatment. He deserved to die like a pig. It was so funny to see him dying in his blood, trying to call for help." The boy laughed crazily. What was that? This boy was totally insane.
"And why have you also killed Takeru?"
"Because he had seen me cutting this pig's throat. I had to shut his mouth." The boy smirked.
I paled at his words and left the room quickly. Tears were rolling down my cheeks and I was shaking.
"Kazu!" I raised my face to see Jun running toward me.
"I'm okay, J..." I smiled weakly but Jun pulled me in his arms where I burst into tears. "Jun..."
"I know." Jun whispered, tightening his grip around me.
"He is... I could see Mamoru in his eyes..." I sobbed violently.
"I know. But it's not the same. This story is over, Kazu. It was a long time ago and you have to forget it." Jun said while stroking my hair.
"But..."
"No, Kazu." Jun cupped my crying face. "It wasn't the same. This story is behind us and we have to forget it, okay?"
"Okay." I nodded weakly.
"I'll take the next case, calm down and come back when you'll feel better." Jun kissed my forehead before leaving.
"Thank you, J." Jun smiled slightly.
I decided to climb on the roof and lightened a cigarette, sighing happily when I started to feel better. My hand was still shaking a bit but I tried to erase the painful memories in my mind.
"Are you okay?" I jumped and turned my head to see Ohno looking at me with worried eyes.
"Yes." I shrugged, taking a puff of my cigarette.
"What happened in the room?"
"Nothing, I was tired and overreacted."
"Liar." Of course he knew I was lying but I would never tell him the truth.
"This boy was scaring."
"I bet you've already seen worst, it's not this boy who put you in this state. It's something else." Ohno stared at me intensively. Shit, he was reading me too well.
"He reminded me an old case that I was trying to forget." I muttered.
"What..."
"Listen, it's not something I want to talk about." I said coldly.
"Okay. But if you need to talk, I'm here."
"Thank you." I smirked and blew my smoke right in his face, making him cough.
"Still an asshole." Ohno mumbled.
"Still annoying." I kissed his cheek and left.
"Ninomiya-san!" I turned my head and before I could react, a pair of lips was pressed against mine.
"It's a 'thank you' for letting me stay in your bed the last night." Ohno grinned in front of my shocked face and left, giggling.
I put my fingers on my lips, paralyzed. Ohno just kissed me some seconds ago? What was that?! What was he playing at?! I had to do something before I could lose the control of this situation.
Next defy: To punish him for defying me again. Ohno Satoshi, you're going to regret your self-confidence!
To be continued...
A/N: Sorry, the sex wasn’t for now xD you have to wait a little bit longer to have our hot Ohmiya fucking xD I like when they provoke each other so, they will fight more before going to bed xD But at least, they got a little bit closer and it’s a good point J Next chapter will be probably posted from Hawaï, I’m so impatient to go there and with all the Arashi blast and concert, it will be fun xD
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Surtout avec ce piou tout chou a la fin ! *ç*
Bien que avant ce Kisu, il encore abusé de son talent pour savoir quelque chose qui ne le regarde évidement pas.. Est-ce vraiment parce qu'il est inquiet ou par curiosité malsaine ?.. Humm..
En tout cas cette partie de Nino ne peut-être guéri apparemment.. Oh Babe.. ;__;
Hahaha n'empêche je serai frustré de travailler avec Kaz' parce qu'il fait beaucoup d'harcèlements sexuels "shut your mouth or I'll shove my dick inside." etc.. Sauf qu'il n'agit JAMAIS !! Va si je t'en prie ! *Dozo ~*
xD
Je suis impatiente de lire le prochain chap' parce qu'à chaque fois Nino promet de martyriser Oh'chan mais.. "Nothing !" TT
Et puis, de toute façon comment veut-il s'y prendre ? En fouillant dans son passé plus profondément ? Lui mentir ? Humm.. Bref ! Tu ne me le diras pas de toute façon.
Merci pour ce chap' Matsu !!
Aaah vivement le suite ~ arf je travaillerai surement en plus ! TT (réserve moi le 1er com' Fufufu)
XOXO
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nino va bien le martyriser dans le prochain chap, le soucis, c'est qu'ohchan va pas se laisser faire et lui rendre la monnaie de sa pièce xD tout ça va finir par partir en cacahuète si ils ne se décident pas à coucher ensemble xD enfin ça par en cacahuète dans le chap 7, je l'écrit trop à l'envers cette fic, j'ai casi fini le dernier chap mais je réécris les chap précédents quand ça me convient plus xD
wait with patience for the next chapter ;) merci pour le com :)
ps/ tu comprends pk je pouvais pas te donner la preview de celui-ci, parce qu'ils couchaient pas ensemble finalement xD
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it's not a hot smutty chapter but it's so sweet and funny..
I love ohmiya here!!!! (>________<)
thanks for updating... ^_____^
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go oh-chaaaan!!! i'm so in love with ohno in this series xD gosh.....
and satopi x3 oh nino, don't try to deny your desire of him x9
and poor ninooo.... you can talk about it with him... he will kiss your problems away~
jun being cute too x3x
thanks for writing!! you should have seen my face when i saw that you have updated this X9 (maybe it's a good thing that you didn't see)
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(even i could think how did my eyes look that time... the flash...)
well then, i will learn to be patience then! >x)
was it sweet? well you're welcome then x3
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yes, sorry, you have to patient :D
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for a vacation or the concert?? o.o
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i'm so jealous T^T i want to go too! and if you are close to that concert place, you can hear all the songs..... damn... give me some of your luck too!! T3T
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I loved their interactions in this chapter :D Especially at the end!!! That kiss, OMG!!!
Now I wanna know what happened to Nino... it's intriguing~
Ah! I loved this line: This man was just too weird. If he didn't exist, we would have to create him
xDDDDD I laughed out loud when I read it.
Thanks very much for the update ^___^ I can't wait for next chapter~
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yes, we use this expression a lot in France, when someone is very funny xD
thank you for reading and commenting dear :)
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something wrong here...something terrible happened to nino. his past is a scary story maybe
and OWHHH...the kiss from the chubby man!!!
thank you so much!!! waiting for the next update..hehe
HAVE A BLAST IN HAWAIIII NEEE~
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nino has many deep scars that haunt him, maybe ohchan will help him to heal :)
eh eh, the kiss was just a peck but super cute, ne xD little devil satoshi who plays with nino's nerves a lot xD
thank you for reading and commenting, I'm sure hawaï will be amazing :D
arigato!!
Re: arigato!!
thank you for reading and commenting :)
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It was much much better than if they had rushed things and gone to bed before knowing each other.
Now, they will be able to develop real feelings for each other, right?
Waiting for more!
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they will tease each other a lot before and will have some fights but maybe it will help them to fall in love ;)
thank you for reading and commenting :)
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thank you so much >.<
*hugs*
aaaaaaaaaaaaaa this's so cute (///u///)
i love it when they teasing each other,so cute~
you will going to arashi blast???
sugeeee~
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I would love to go, but just if I can xD at least, I would have been where arashi started and maybe will bring arashi's blast goodies xD
thank you for reading and commenting dear :)