I thought you might want me to comment here, so that I do the same you did with my fictions =D *I mean I put a proper comment on one of them finally!*
I know I've not been much of a good beta for this, I took a lot of time, but I liked this fiction a lot! Well, sometimes I REALLY wanted to tell Jun to WAKE THE FUCK UP but well.... XD In the end, Kazu did! Well done xD
This fiction was really dark, right? I mean, wit everything that happens to Ohchan, poor him, but I kind of had the feeling that Ohchan let these things happen to him without fighting, and it was a bit sad.... I think... As if he didn't want to fight back against life anymore, you know...
But I loved Aiba's character! He is the hero of this story, isn't he? He helped Ohchan and Jun through everything, he supported Jun when everyone was against him, he supported Ohchan when he found out about his past, I really like him in your fic x)
One thing I have to say, I might be cruel to Ohchan when I write fictions, but you are more than me! There were so many rape scenes in this fic, more than I could bear, I admit >.< Otherwise, I liked it a lot! Jun and Ohno helping each other through life, isn't it the most wonderful thing there is? xD
I know my comment is reeeeaaaally messed up, but that's how it is inside of my head, you know me x) But I don't want you to think that I didn't like it, because I know you did think that at some point, because I DID ♥ I mean it >.< Good job =) Love you~~~ ♥
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I know I've not been much of a good beta for this, I took a lot of time, but I liked this fiction a lot! Well, sometimes I REALLY wanted to tell Jun to WAKE THE FUCK UP but well.... XD In the end, Kazu did! Well done xD
This fiction was really dark, right? I mean, wit everything that happens to Ohchan, poor him, but I kind of had the feeling that Ohchan let these things happen to him without fighting, and it was a bit sad.... I think... As if he didn't want to fight back against life anymore, you know...
But I loved Aiba's character! He is the hero of this story, isn't he? He helped Ohchan and Jun through everything, he supported Jun when everyone was against him, he supported Ohchan when he found out about his past, I really like him in your fic x)
One thing I have to say, I might be cruel to Ohchan when I write fictions, but you are more than me! There were so many rape scenes in this fic, more than I could bear, I admit >.< Otherwise, I liked it a lot! Jun and Ohno helping each other through life, isn't it the most wonderful thing there is? xD
I know my comment is reeeeaaaally messed up, but that's how it is inside of my head, you know me x)
But I don't want you to think that I didn't like it, because I know you did think that at some point, because I DID ♥ I mean it >.<
Good job =) Love you~~~ ♥